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About Me Member Deviant of Many Talents EvealleFemale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Months
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Inner Hopes

Mon Nov 16, 2009, 9:16 PM
Inner Hopes

a poem in free verse by evealle

I have a goal, a wish a dream,

But if I tell you, it won’t be secret.

I’m afraid to show my true heart to the world

For fear they’ll laugh at my fanciful desires,

(Scorn my greatest hopes for my life).

And if they did that, I would feel foolish for my fantasies.

I would feel as if They had been correct,

As if I Had been foolish. But I promise you I haven’t!

It’s very realistic, but they’ve corrupted me to believe that they’re right.

However, if I did tell someone they could encourage me to push ahead.

I need the inspiration, that’s for sure.

Could I tell you? Can I trust you will not scoff, throw my soul to the dust?

Scorn, that awful bullet, pierces the vulnerable me.

Could me courage, not condescension; Help, not horror; Spirit, not spite?

Can you keep a secret?

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I had problems uploading it as a deviation, so I put it here instead.

-Evealle

  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: The fish tank.
  • Reading: NJG threads

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  • Interests: Dancing, drawing, writing, RPing, music, daydreaming, dancing, singing
  • Favourite movie: A Funny Thing Happened On The Way To The Forum, Are You Being Served?, Into The Woods
  • Favourite band or musician: Regina Spektor, Hugh Grant, John Inman, Stephan Sondhiem, Andrew Lloyd Webber
  • Favourite genre of music: Musicals, rock, soundtracks
  • Favourite poet or writer: Vivian Vande Velde, Holly Black, Victor Hugo, JKR, Tolkien

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:iconx22x:
Thank you for the favorite.

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"Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."-Victor Borge
:iconlizn:
Thank you for the fave!

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"The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, is not 'Eureka!' but 'That's funny...' "
Isaac Asimov
:iconevealle:
It was just soo pretty!

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Red, I feel my soul on fire!
Black, my world if she's not there!

Red, the color of desire!
Black, the color of despair!
:iconx22x:
Thank you for the watch, sugah!

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"Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."-Victor Borge
:iconevealle:
I meant to do it so long ago! Ack!

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Red, I feel my soul on fire!
Black, my world if she's not there!

Red, the color of desire!
Black, the color of despair!
:iconx22x:
Oh no worries. ;)

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"Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."-Victor Borge
:iconevealle:
I meant to do it so long ago! Ack!

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Red, I feel my soul on fire!
Black, my world if she's not there!

Red, the color of desire!
Black, the color of despair!
:iconevealle:
Sigh. I hate my internet...

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Red, I feel my soul on fire!
Black, my world if she's not there!

Red, the color of desire!
Black, the color of despair!
:iconevealle:
Thank YOU. :P (This could turn into a fight.)

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Red, I feel my soul on fire!
Black, my world if she's not there!

Red, the color of desire!
Black, the color of despair!

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